Talk:Dusty Dunes Desert

I'm sort of new to wiki editing, so excuse me. So, under "History", there's a line that says "Along the way, they meet a gold miner named Gerardo Montague near a small hole asking for food, and give him some." This is... technically what they do, but I feel like it doesn't really sound... right? I couldn't think of anything to replace it with, but I would like to change it somehow. -- Psychotrope (talk) 20:52, 8 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Can you describe anything specific on what's wrong? It might help you determine ways to fix it. E.g. needs to be better grammatically; find other words that better suit what is going on, contextually; etc. Tacopill (talk) 22:27, 8 September 2020 (UTC)